I'm Watching You!

I agree that the shoulder looks a little awkward, I also note from below that there have been some tweeks to the internal view of the end of the barrel, but it still looks slightly strange, (the internal view of the end looks good in this one [link] ), and I love the dof except I can't quite see where the focal point is... generally it is the surface of the eye, but here it looks more like the end of the scope or close to the trigger finger... that may be intentional, but it looses some of its impact I think? - just my personal opinion you understand! It does have the making of a good image, but may benefit from a couple more tweeks? - that and slightly more s/p would make this an outstanding image... `¬)